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To be honest it was confusing at first, but after the second read I found I could identify with it! The way you personified a match in lines like: "O, ...

G'day Avens, sorry I took so long to reply, I'll get to work on that immediately

Hey! and thanks for that review, I'm sorry i haven't had the time to read it but ill get on that right now :D

My apologies boon XD... i didn't see your post before I responded.

:lol: Tee-Hee, i cant stop laughing... HEheHe.... :lol: so I go to the place where we refrigerate.

Hello and thank you for reviewing. I took all of your advice to heart, Sureal! :D Rukuen, I'm sorry if this part left you a bit confused, you see there ...

Wow.. today was a good day. Now ill have to go back to bed and cover my head with a sheet and rock slowly. That was depressing... but that was ...

July awakens,< - nice beginning, sets the tone. born from the middle month in the balmy peace of a summer midnight.

Very evocative metaphors and great use of imagery: roadkill of my virginity

I'm sorry I don't have time for a long review, seeing as its been done already it'll probably clog up your thread anyways. Ronnie jumped at the bodiless, high-pitched voice. ...

I was about to read this... but I gave up halfway. For some reason you posted this as if it reads all on one line, and I'm not a fan ...

Never take more than you give :) Soaring high above the sea Dipping low and falling free; Gliding lightly on summer breeze Turning deftly with practiced ease, Dropping fast towards ...

I hope you enjoy this piece and post comments and suggestions.

Hey guys, thank you very much for those reviews. I am going to take the time out now to apologize for the lateness of this edit. :oops: Posted: Thu Jul ...

Thank you very much for that review. Currently i dont have time to alter it but i will come back as soon as I do. :D